Some more of my poetry.

[reynardo]

I entered the Lord Mayor's Poetry competition - alas, didn't get anywhere. But for those interested parties, here is my entry, a socio-something or other comment on the addictions I see every day.

Comments

[starduchess]

Sweet! I like it. It can be applied to lots of addictions: medicine, shopping (especially Black Friday) but by the end is quite clearly coffee. :)

Your rhythm was good, except my brain tripped over "overnight withdrawal tremors" - a little bit too wordy. The images were spot-on, though.

[fluidsparkles]

Love ... mmmm Cofffeee I got mine already.

Oh for a skilled maker rather than insta...

[kerravonsen]

I was initially expecting it to be something like coffee, then I changed my mind half-way through, only to discover I was right in the first place. 8-)

[17catherines]

That really works! Nicely done.