Comments | rewindclunkplay: fic: It's Cool, We Can Still Be Friends

rewindclunkplay

fic: It's Cool, We Can Still Be Friends

Apr 26, 2011 19:14

For a brief moment when Remus had found him again, he thought that maybe things could go back to how they used to be. It was a very fleeting thought, because there were more pressing matters at hand, namely the rat (in more ways than one). But it was there, a brief moment when Remus allowed himself to remember those memories he had banished to the ( Read more... )

pairing: hp: remus/sirius, fic: harry potter, rating: pg-13, oh look nicole is posting fic

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rewindclunkplay April 28 2011, 04:21:49 UTC

thank you so much!

scintillulae April 28 2011, 03:57:58 UTC

Oh, that was lovely. ♥ ♥

rewindclunkplay April 28 2011, 04:22:00 UTC

thank you <3

fayte April 29 2011, 12:26:45 UTC

Love this so much!

rewindclunkplay April 29 2011, 17:47:42 UTC

thank you!

brighty18 April 29 2011, 20:02:56 UTC

This was so beautiful, I just about want to die. Siriusly. I'm a sucker for post-Azkaban, of course, but this was exceedingly well done. I love how you managed angst without true heartbreak and that they came together in the end.

Sirius' fragility was heart-breaking but, very, very real, and the way he (or, rather you) used sleep was really wonderful. Of course he would need to be with Remus to sleep. Of course he would need comfort and company. You showed that very well without making the poor man mad or over-the-top broken. You see that too much in fan fic (or it's opposite, perfectly fine Sirius with not issues at all from his twelve years of hell). It's a fine line and you danced it rather than walked it beautifully.

Your narrative voice is gorgeous and there was so much to love. This sentence was especially perfect: And then everything falls apart. He falls apart, rips apart, tears apart, ruins everything, and not even Sirius can contain him. The wolf is angry at Padfoot for 12 years of absence.

Really well done!

rewindclunkplay April 30 2011, 00:26:08 UTC

well there's no need to die! haha.

Thank you for your gorgeous review! It made me feel lovely, I'm glad you liked this <3

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rewindclunkplay May 1 2011, 20:28:41 UTC

Their entire relationship is extremely bitter sweet, I find, regardless of the era you're reading- that's possibly what draws me to them, I think! I mean they really can't catch a break, there's betrayal and spies and Azkaban and death, poor things.

Thank you for your review, it was lovely! I'm glad you decided to check this out, and I'm glad you liked it <3