fic: proper goodbyes

[rewindclunkplay]

hey! listen!: idk what's up with lj and i'm getting the feeling i can't do jack shit about it so it will be much easier to read this if you click the title or the comments bc then it will bring you to that lovely white screen where everything is formatted the way i wanted it to be kbye*

Comments

[forsanethaec]

lovely piece, emotional and true. the color motifs were great, and the compare/contrast between sirius and tonks came through well. your writing has a nice pace to it. you even kind of made me accept r/t, which doesn't often happen! thanks for sharing, i enjoyed this.

[rewindclunkplay]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[xbluishgreenx]

“You forget I’m a Black. Her being my cousin is basically a turn on for me.”

Oh lord. Oh my actual LORD.
Your humor and your angst and your asdfghjkl I PRAISE YOU AS A HIGHER POWER, MISS WRITER-GODDESS.
I liked how this didn't seem biased one way or another, like I couldn't tell if you were praising one ship or the other or both. You seemed just as lost as Remus. Made the whole thing very endearing.

[rewindclunkplay]

DO NOT PRAISE ME MISS, I AM NOT WORTHY.
and I'm glad I didn't seem biased because I can assure you I definitely am :D

anyway, thanks dear <3

[phiso_kun]

Oooh the end of this is just heart-wrenching.

He doesn’t want to see. She doesn’t show this to many people and he desperately wants to not be one of them.

Ahhh this. This was so sad, as was the part about her turning grey and not fighting for him. I love how you compare the two and how this all works out in his head. It's sad and lonely and makes me feel for everyone.

Lovely. <3

[rewindclunkplay]

thank you!

[rewindclunkplay]

thank you so much, I'm glad you like them :)