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[kainasilverbane]

Title:Shards
Author/Penname: Kainasilverbane
Rating:PG-13
Chapters: 19 (Complete)
Pairings: Fujitaka/Kaho centered
Summary:
Warning, Notes: Lyrics belong to singer Katherine McPhee. I was planning and trying to write an original song for this chapter, but I was unable to get anything out that I felt did just to what I wanted to portray lyric

Comments

[sheila_chan]

This is actually for a charity fund for the cities orphanage (this is either orphanages within the city or city orphanages or orphanages in various cities

Sakura also has another roll (it's role sweetie:p when I first read this I pictured Sakura rolling, and then I realized that she can't be rollingXD)…

This song also expresses the love and family that the (omit and replace with they or she) have come to find at the end of this long journey.

I(omit the 'I') she had time to write this when? Kaho asked the man sitting next to her. (Also, although writing in this format is ok, I suggest using quotation marks since you've used it pretty much in your storyü)

Kaho, still holding Fujitaka’s hand, looked (at) him in the eye for one short second, then phased them backstage, before anyone in the crowd noticed the strange disappearance (of what?? I didn't quite get this). Sakura immediately found them.

And where’s the lady of the hour,(omit comma and replace with a question mark) we wish to express our enjoyment to her as well.

I ♥ this