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reverokameorih

Keeping Secrets (2min + Onew)

Dec 03, 2009 23:11

Title: Keeping Secrets
Pairing: 2min Onew
Rating: PG-16
A/N: dedicated to blindteddy ilu girl ♥

( He crouches closer to the wall with his heart beating fast )

shinee, jinki, fanfic, minho, taemin

Comments 54

blindteddy December 4 2009, 01:27:20 UTC

Spot. :| Just in case. lol

blindteddy December 4 2009, 01:31:35 UTC

I didn't expect THIS to happen! lol
And omg, i don't know if Jinki is lucky or not for being able to see that scene. I don't understand how he felt so upset about seeing all that and for not being able to respect their privacy if they were in the middle of their dorm. lol Poor Jinki, he can't even think straight!

This was so nice to read. ;O; I can say that you have improved a lot in the past few months! ♥ This was awesome and i really liked it and it was hot and PLEASE WRITE SOME SMUT SOON!!!! LOL

The ending was so sweet. I really loved Minho's actions towards Jinki and Taemin was just so sweet. :'D
(PLUS! I loved how they both touched each other when they were together. ♥ I felt the love between them. ;O;)

I love you girl! ♥♥♥

reverokameorih December 4 2009, 01:39:06 UTC

AELSCAEKPGVOIGVJNMSKDVGOREG *blushes*

LMAO I'm glad you were surprised XDD I was dying because I knew it was SOOO cliché but oh well, Jinki is so perfect for this it's scary :|

I mean, Jinki knew they were kinda together and their apartment isn't big or anything, but idk uh, common sense to look away or something? I hope his fail was evident even under ciscunstances :'D

DAW <3 really, thank you so much for your comment ;3; ♥ LMAO I'm not sure, but I might write some pron eventually.....X'D

YES to the 2min love <3 I can't help but to write them that way towards each other ♥ and their unconditional love to their leader <3

ILU2 girl~~! ♥♥♥ >

xxsilentxstarxx December 4 2009, 04:15:37 UTC

WOH!!!
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Naughty boys Kekeke seducing their Hyung Kekeke

reverokameorih December 4 2009, 16:18:37 UTC

Hope this was a good 'WOH'? xDDD

lol IRK they knew all along and yet they left their hyung to suffer LOL <3

Thanks for leaving a comment! :DDDD

xxqod December 4 2009, 07:43:47 UTC

lol!
Jinki! xD
Taemin and Minho are totally cute, well hot XD
But Jinki couldn't not have watched it ^^
I'm talking gibberish now...
The ending was totally cute!

really loved it! :D <3 ~~

reverokameorih December 4 2009, 16:17:44 UTC

LMAO ur icons are the best XDDDD jjong faces are rly priceless <3

who could have resisted against some 2min smut love? 8D

Thanks a lot!! :DDD <3

xxqod December 4 2009, 16:19:41 UTC

thank you! I look everyday for new pictures I can use to make my icons XD His faces are the best!

No one can resist 2Min! much too adorable!
<3 ~~

pixziestikxz December 4 2009, 08:04:04 UTC

OH JINKI. ♥

reverokameorih December 4 2009, 16:16:23 UTC

YES <3

Thanks for leaving a comment xD Hope you liked it :D

earenya_beryl December 4 2009, 23:09:55 UTC

Oh, wow so they do know!
That last paragraph was absolutely daebak!
Though by your last sentence, it seems like you ended it quite openly, with possibility of continuation, at the readers creativity, hahaha which I love.
Please let Jinki get seduced, he really needs it, LOL

Thank you for sharing!!!

reverokameorih December 4 2009, 23:23:19 UTC

Hey it's you! :D
HAHAHAHA maybe I could write a continuation to this, who knows~ I'm not that good with rated stuff XD;;
Im glad o know my story wasn't too shallow ;A;'

Thanks for the adorable comment!! :D ♥