Tabula Rasa: Chapter Ten - Not Quite Domestic Bliss

[rever_d_elysium]

Title: Tabula Rasa
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Word Count: 6,439 words
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This is the story of a forgotten replica. This is the story of an awakening princess. This is a story of mercenaries and salvation and fairies. And this is a story of people and growing up. [it all started with a blank slate...]

Disclaimer: The author of this

Comments

Wonderful!

[demonicfangirl]

slight malfunction in this paragraph:
"Oh. Kairi smiled at her, since she looked and sounded unsure and guilty. Thank you, Naminé; I would never have thought of it on my own, which was a lie, but a small one, and Riku would worry.almost ended up sprawled on the floor, but Cid pushed Riku forward and they somehow ended up standing straight."

Looks like half a sentence got ate somehow.

AAAH!! Sora does NOT need to know how to steal!!!

another malfunctioned paragraph: "She really shouldn’t have been as surprised as she was when she found Riku in the kitchen, obviously the culprit. Sora was leaning against the " - it just ends there.

aaawww! ... No Zack this chapter! *nibbles*
I can't wait till ch11 then! Moar Zack plzkthx? *hearts*

[rever_d_elysium]

Oh, gah. Stupid tags. I messed up on one and significantly more than a sentence was munched -- check now, it should be better.

...Butbutbut, think of how much EASIER it'll be to make the Ultima Weapon! He won't have to equip the wimpiest keyblade he has JUST to get the last fricken items! *isn't bitter, of course not* Eh, even if he does steal (Yuffie could keep putting him off), there will be other stuff to balance it out...

...I really should NOT try to operate tags late at night. *glareglaresulkkick*

...Huh. That one was just lost in translation. That's odd, I thought I caught all those. Blegh. Should be better now.

XD Yeah, it alternates~ Next chapter is Zack, then either Kairi or mixed, depending on what's going on.