Comments | reveneirz: [FIC] The Vertigo Shot [KH2/Zemyx/Part B]

reveneirz

[FIC] The Vertigo Shot [KH2/Zemyx/Part B]

Jan 15, 2007 15:33

TITLE: The Vertigo Shot
AUTHOR: S-P [reveneirz/Sinful Serenity@fanfiction.net]
RATING: Um. PG13 for some swearing?
GENRE: Drama, semi-AU
PAIRING: Zexion/Demyx
WARNINGS: shounen ai, slight spoilers for CoM/KH2
WORD COUNT: {1/1} 13,521
SUMMARY: Memory, like pride, is a dangerous thing: a blade that, when unheeded rusts, and handled carelessly, cuts ( Read more... )

Comments 11

ohmegawd January 16 2007, 01:19:17 UTC

I love it! That whole idea that it all could have been some mental illness is very original. And the entire mood of the piece left me feeling content in the end. Very nice job.

runtus_maximus January 16 2007, 03:38:02 UTC

Everything about this- the characterizations, the imagery- was beautiful. It's all so heartbreaking and hopeful at the same time, and Demyx's blow-up scene couldn't have been better. I really enjoyed reading it. <3

reveneirz January 16 2007, 07:29:04 UTC

Oh, good, I was really worried I'd written Demyx out as too OOC in that particular scene. Thanks for the feedback.

rainbowserenity January 16 2007, 06:45:36 UTC

Wow. Holy cheese wow!
It's soooo hard to find really good Zemyx fics out there, and this is definitely one of them. ♥ I loved the mental illness point--it made the whole fic seem a lot more real, and that's really hard to find in stuff lately.

Major props and cookies to you. ♥

reveneirz January 16 2007, 07:28:11 UTC

Aren't they?! I'm always dying for good Zemyx fic.

Mmm, cookies. ♥

nathanialroyale January 16 2007, 06:58:30 UTC

The ending was tray..(amazing)..I must add further that I agree the mental illness was awesome thinking on your part weither it be real or not though it sounds real..*could go check but to lazy* Loved it.

reveneirz January 16 2007, 07:27:18 UTC

the illnesses actually are real. xD I was bored and ran across them on wikipedia, so that's sort of where my idea for the fic was born. also where I got the title. ^^

fantasia0829 January 16 2007, 16:34:11 UTC

This fic is brilliant. There are so many things about it that I adore, like the characterization, the flood of emotions running underneath the fic, the smooth writing style, Namine's cameo (her need to preserve her mother's memories is just a stroke of genius cuz it relates to her past life so well), the subtlety of everything and most of all, characterization. Yes, I said that twice, because that's what really got me here.

Demyx and Zexion were just so in character, each dealing with the memories of their past lives in their own way. They just seem so real like that.

I just wish there are more Zemyx fics like this out there.

Hope to see more from you. ^^