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[fic: lost]

Jun 18, 2010 00:44

they buried us in shallow graves
lost. nikki/paulo. she swallows water and tastes dirt ~1500 | pg13

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Comments 9

cloudytea June 18 2010, 06:20:14 UTC

YOU. YOU. YOU.
YOU HAVE DONE THE IMPOSSIBLE.
You have redeemed Nikki and Paulo.

Oh, wow. That was...That was amazing. I was seriously going to pass this up, but seconds after I started reading, I just couldn't stop. Thank you for writing this, it truly changed my outlook on them. :D

failegaidin June 18 2010, 11:33:09 UTC

So well done. Especially with characters that many of us either never another thought to, or didn't want to. Serious kudos, my friend.

captaintish June 18 2010, 14:52:40 UTC

Wow. That was beautifully written.

flaky_artist June 18 2010, 15:44:34 UTC

Yaay, Nikki and Paulo! It's great to see fic about them. This is absolutely lovely, such wonderful descriptions. Nice work!

knopflergroupie June 18 2010, 19:33:40 UTC

WOW. It's always good to see fic focusing on minor characters, and this was just...wow. I loved everything about it. Eko's role in the fic was perfect, given that Nikki and Paulo actually had something to do with him on the show. The spider metaphors were great. The whole fic had a terrifically creepy and claustrophobic air to it that actually had my skin crawling. Seriously, this was a fantastic tribute to these characters that were never really given a chance. Great job!