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Fic: We Forgot to Slow Down (2/4)

Sep 16, 2016 07:00

Title: We Forgot to Slow Down (2/4)
Author: reve_silencieux
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Neal, Sara, Mozzie, Neal/Sara
Spoilers: None
Warnings: mpreg
Word Count: 16,400 (This chapter: 3,916)
Beta: sherylyn
Summary: Several months into Neal's cycle, it's summer and hot, and unfortunately, it's going to get a little rougher for Neal after he receives some news...
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character: neal, character: sara, neal/sara, series: once upon another time, character: mozzie, white collar, wc fic

Comments 6

sheenianni September 18 2016, 07:39:29 UTC

Heh, Mozzie's not that far off with his theory... I love how he's such a good friend to Neal. You can tell that he'll do whatever it takes to help. Sometimes it feels he doesn't get nearly enough credit in fanfic.

The Neal-Sara moment is wonderful. I wonder how much she believes Neal's claim that he's reformed...

I'm looking forward to the next part :)

reve_silencieux September 23 2016, 03:53:53 UTC

You wouldn't believe how hard it was to figure out the plot *without* Neal being an active player like in the episode. So Moz had to do a lot of the heavy lifting. But he will do anything for Neal, which I love.

Heh, Neal, reformed? He's a little different in this universe, returning art and really doing it more for the challenge and fun, but I do think he's okay giving it up. More so than Neal of canon.

Thanks!!

sapphire2309 September 18 2016, 20:05:58 UTC

NEAL T.T HE IS BREAKING MY HEART HERE.

Like, the memories of the happy times but also the quiet ways in which he's dealing with things like 'was' and 'used to' while still holding it together and trying to bring her justice. And Moz. Best Friend of the Year award, tbh. Moz <3

reve_silencieux September 23 2016, 03:55:22 UTC

I love Moz. I really do. Even if he's freaking hard to write! But yes, he's awesome and best friend ever.

And poor Neal... *hugs him* I really am putting him through the wringer.

:D Thank you as always!!

ext_3733632 September 19 2016, 05:16:49 UTC

The angst! I just can't! Poor Neal, my heart is breaking with him and for him. It's clever and good though how you've interwoven parts of canon in this universe 😊. And knowing how it turned out in canon, I'm hoping for a happy ending for the two of them.

reve_silencieux September 23 2016, 03:57:02 UTC

It's not just canon - if you know me... :D

I'm so happy to hear you like how I've worked in the episode. It was surprisingly hard to figure out the plot without Neal actively working the case. Thank you!!