The Romance
My second exercise in directing class. This time I worked more professionally. First, I wrote a shooting script and made a draft shooting using home camcorder. Then I made correction to the script and changed some shots composition. Second, I took cool hardware at the faculty’s warehouse: Camera Sony Z1 (my 1st time wide screen shooting) and a
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Comments 1
The general impression is good. Continuity is good. Trick with sitting down on the rose is
funny and surprising. Maayan is cute and acting good - not overplaying.
Remarks:
1. The scene in the bathroom is clumsy in a whole
a. 1st shot is too open, it’s enough to see some small details to understand the
location
b. The swimsuit is clearly seen
c. Tilt down is not smooth
d. The difference b/w the 2nd and the 3rd shots is very subtle. Need different
sizes and angles.
e. She looks directly to the camera, not good.
f. Doorbell is hardly heard, thus it’s not connected well with the tilt stop.
g. Tap shutting down is good, both size, timing and duration.
2. Getting out of the bathroom
a. Good shot size
b. It would be better if wet footprint would remain on the floor.
3. Walking through the hallway
a. Too much open
b. Cut with previous shot is not good
c. Too much light
4. Mirror
a. Too much open
b. Not logical - why she does not hurry up?
5. Looking through peepholea. Good ( ... )
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