one heart, out of two.

Sep 06, 2010 22:23

(your heart is) as red as mine
200 words. Stevie/Xabi and things that are important.

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.football, xabi alonso, steven gerrard

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pippopippo September 7 2010, 02:30:15 UTC
I SEE YOUR PARENTHESES. ♥

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pendules September 7 2010, 02:32:43 UTC
At least there aren't parentheses within parentheses within parentheses. So I'm good with these. ;)

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darkblue September 7 2010, 04:19:24 UTC
I'm talking to Vy online, and I just said: asdfgvnbyhvgcdfh OH MAN. PARENTHESES. I LOVE SHADAE'S PARENTHESES.

Because seriously. I missed it. Also I don't even like Liverpool but this fic just kind of hit me, S. IDK, you and your words. ♥

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pendules September 7 2010, 04:29:13 UTC
LOL. I love you two so. ♥ I wish I didn't have to go to bed right now. D: Why am I still awake, omg. I think I'll be asking myself that every night for the next few months...

I think the parentheses come out when I feel the most about something...and it just all comes out in a rush of emotion and chaotic sentences. Yeah, this is totally what happened with this fic. But I think it - that style or whatever - fit here.

Thanks, Rachie, as always. :)

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everyforever September 7 2010, 02:56:35 UTC
oh my god, my heart. this is so perfect, so short & perfect. i'm a little bit heartbroken & surprised that 200 words could do this to me.

amazing work, definitely adding to memories! ♥

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pendules September 7 2010, 21:34:16 UTC
Oh, thank you. Glad you liked it. :)

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sockisdead September 7 2010, 04:01:43 UTC
I'm surprised at my constant heartbreak over this matter, even after a year. These two just break my heart.
Fantastic story, I love how it could easily reflect Stevie's mind. Keep on writing :)

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pendules September 7 2010, 21:35:19 UTC
Glad you thought it was realistic. Thanks! :D

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lullaby9 September 7 2010, 04:22:03 UTC
Stevie :__(

this comment it's so miserable but my brain it's dying, i can't help it *haven't sleep* I liked tho "Their insane, irrational, amazing, fucking religious belief that we could always do the impossible - and us doing it because they believed." yep, that's how we are and all because of them :)

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pendules September 7 2010, 21:36:07 UTC
Yeah, I know that too well too. Thanks for reading! :)

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tabacoychanel September 7 2010, 04:57:32 UTC
flawless drabble is flawless, etc.

oh STEVIIIIIIIE. and XAAAAAAAAAAAAABI

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pendules September 7 2010, 21:36:50 UTC
Thank you! :D

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