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elfinmouse October 29 2011, 01:44:57 UTC
This was wonderful. You really captured the feel of The Crow, the vengance and despair, but gave it a nice twist. Castiel falling in love with Dean in the middle of his hatred was well done, and I love how complex Dean was - his own situatin not being drowned out by Castiels. Your characterization for the both of them was great.

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reticentric October 29 2011, 03:52:06 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm really happy you enjoyed it and took the time to review. =) I really appreciate it.

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reticentric October 30 2011, 02:57:42 UTC
Thank you so much! I love the movie too and I thought man, Cas would look awesome with the makeup cause of his eyes and boom, this story was born. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :)

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hannah_delaney October 30 2011, 19:33:53 UTC
I just have to start out with saying I've never seen this movie. Despite that, I decided to give this story a chance, and I'm so glad I did.
The narration was great; it really pulled me into the plot. Also, the characterization was very good as well.
There were a few grammatical/typographical errors, but it surprisingly didn't bother me too much.
Lastly, I loved the many little details that matched up with canon; I don't really want to start listing them off-hopefully you know which things I'm talking about. (^_^;)
This was overall just great. *w*

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reticentric October 30 2011, 23:12:34 UTC
XD I'm glad you took a chance on it; thank you so much. If you ever decide to check the movies out the first two are the best. Also I'm sorry about the errors...I swear you read over something 20 times and still end up missing something. That always drives me crazy. Anyway thank you for taking the time to read and review!

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leyna55 November 2 2011, 12:32:08 UTC
I like the revisions you made to the story, particularly the reason Dean didn't end up a cop and that little heart to heart scene with John.

And I don't remember if I mentioned it to you before, but both Ellen and Pamela had kickass cameos, and I really enjoyed their scenes. The scene with Azazel and Alastair was damn tense and creepy, too.

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reticentric November 3 2011, 01:37:55 UTC
Hehe thank you! I'm happy you approve especially since adding more to his story was your idea. I think it really helped the story; people have commented on how they're happy Cas' story didn't over shadow Dean's. And I liked how Dean wanted to be a cop again in the end; I'm sure Cas ended up appreciating the uniform lol.

Thanks for taking the time to read again and comment. I appreciate it!

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make5hift_wings November 3 2011, 07:41:43 UTC
Oh, I wasn't sure about this, The Crow is one of my favourite graphics ever and I love the film, but I'm so glad I read it.

You did a wonderful job, just enough touches of canon from both sides wrapped around a slow-burn of a romance. Great characterisations even in the cameos. One of my faves so far!

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reticentric November 3 2011, 14:45:01 UTC
I'm really happy you decided to take a chance and that you ended up enjoying it. I've never had a chance to read the graphics but I've always enjoyed the movie too. I'm glad it didn't disappoint!

XD Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it!

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