B*tch made me drop my Lollipop....*EDIT* Now has BOTH pages.

[brainofcreation]

So I promised I'd draw you guys a comic showing WHY the ladies were bandaging Spits up.

Comments

[kamesen24]

The pacing works well throughout your comic. The only part that confuses me a little is the third panel. Because the witch is running at Jockey in the second panel, it almost seems like it is the witch shoving Jockey afterward. I would change the third panel to show Spits jumping in the way; that might clarify things.

Also, I like the witch's lunging momentum in the second panel; you should keep that going in the fourth panel too. BUT that's enough from me; those are just a few thoughts of mine. All in all, good poses here.

[brainofcreation]

I figured the cuffed sleeve gave it away LOL, my bad!

I don't think the Witch would get much momentum considering Spits is six foot six and pretty solid. Unstoppable force meet seriously immovable object. Immovable object refuses to break or bend because despite the fact that he has no sexual interest in women, he respects them INTENSELY, even as fighters. So Witch or not, he ain't budging. Simply because Jockey is there and more importantly, she's in shock.

I'm gonna edit this so it'll have the other pages. In which Spits breaks the Witch's nose.

[brainofcreation]

I don't have that idea as I'm a straight woman who's engaged to a sweet straight man and have met more than one a*&hole gay guy. I know full well exactly how awful people of ANY group can be and likewise how sweet one person of any group can be, thank you kindly

[zarla]

dang, you'd have to be really tough to take a witch attack and not be incapped or somethin, they're like the strongest zombies in the game. :o

[brainofcreation]

Spits is determined! LOL