Comments | resha_hime: [Fic] Boys Night In

resha_hime

[Fic] Boys Night In

Feb 14, 2007 05:02

Hi, I'm new to LJ although I've been lurking around for a long long time. So now, I'm stepping out of the shadows with a fic as an offering.

Pairing : Ohtori x Shishido
Warnings : Boys kissing, Yaoi, Fluff, and maybe some OOC, some swearing, un-betaed.
Summary : Written for Valentine’s day and Ohtori’s Bday.

( It was late in the evening when Ohtori Choutarou found himself sitting in his living room and idly flipping through the channels on the television. )

fic, ohtori x shishido

Comments 12

_profiterole_ February 13 2007, 22:35:03 UTC

Those two are way too cute. ♥

resha_hime February 14 2007, 14:53:20 UTC

Those two are way too cute. ♥

^_^ AGREED!

cris_kanaschiro February 13 2007, 23:40:43 UTC

Adorable, so cute! I loved it! Thanks for sharing!
Shishido cooking was very... cute (and funny!)

resha_hime February 14 2007, 14:55:21 UTC

Hehe. ^^ Thank you! Will attempt to write more from now on!

traveling_storm February 14 2007, 04:33:46 UTC

Having the same b-day as Ohtori, I understand his frustration all to well. Lucky thing he has Shishido to make it right! ^^ Great fic!

resha_hime February 14 2007, 15:00:35 UTC

Thank you!! XDD

Having the same b-day as Ohtori, I understand his frustration all to well.

Really? Must be tough sharing ur big day~ *hugs* Um, glad that u could relate to this fic then, I think? ^^;;

kikumarubazooka February 14 2007, 11:28:40 UTC

That was so cute! :3 *glomp*

Ohtori wasn’t sure what the chocolate was supposed to be shaped after but all he could think that it resembled of was a very bad impersonation of Mount Fuji. LOL! XD

resha_hime February 14 2007, 15:02:14 UTC

*glomps back* Thank you!!!

silver_spray February 14 2007, 11:52:16 UTC

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Really loved this fic. ^^ Shishido was cute here, becoming distressed over Choutarou's silence at the chocolate. XD

resha_hime February 14 2007, 15:04:25 UTC

Thank you! I was afraid that I'd made Shishido a bit too OOC here but I'm glad you like it anyway. XDD

silver_spray February 14 2007, 15:15:52 UTC

Don't worry about OOCness, there is always a slight bit of it in any fic. It's fine as long as it's believable and doesn't distract the reader. Besides, I felt that was quite in chracter. Shishido does seems like the kind of guy who would get flustered easily when it comes to relationships.

resha_hime February 14 2007, 16:26:05 UTC

Hm, I see. Thanks for the tip! Will keep it in mind for future works! -^_^-