A hefty dose of Ten/Donna

Mar 30, 2008 01:33

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x_los March 30 2008, 06:17:01 UTC
"oh-look-isn’t-this-neat-you-humans-always-find-a-way-Earth. "

SNORT

"done that weird thing where he kind of sticks a finger in one of his eyes and rubs really hard like he’s trying get out a massive piece of sleep or something."

God, what is he MINING for in there?! He appears to be bloody prospecting for gold.

"The Doctor solemnly said, “like your duckies,”"

GOLD.

"And she was a tried and true ale drinker, unless something with an umbrella in it wandered way on a beach. "

I think a pronoun has left this sentence alone. The sentence will probably cry, vow revenge, and scheme to try desperately to win it back. That's how these things go.

"because she wasn’t going to walk across continents for him,"

Unexpected!Awesome characterization moment!

"The Doctor stole all of the covers, made snuffling sounds in his sleep, "

Freaking eerie! I was just talking today about how Doctor is a cover-stealing man-ho.

Oh Donna DOES crave a curry.

SQUEE! I looove it. Well done!

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honorh March 30 2008, 06:29:13 UTC
Dude. I'm so going to have a mad-on for Ten/Donna this coming season, mostly because I think he needs a good domming like whoa. This is great; I can totally hear Donna's voice through the whole thing.

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reserve March 30 2008, 21:03:05 UTC
A good domming is so what Donna is bringing to the party next week. Rusty is all like, "they're not gonna be in love," and so: they're so not going to be. But that's not going to stop me from writing Donna like this for a while. Because you know what? Fuck love!

Thanks so much for reading and for speaking my language.

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radiantbaby March 30 2008, 07:42:43 UTC
This was utterly brilliant -- very spot-on characterizations, very well-written prose, and sexy hotness. :)

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reserve March 30 2008, 21:00:41 UTC
*blushes* Thank you! I'm so happy you liked this. I was super nervous posting it. So yes, thank you for reading, and I'm glad the characterizations worked for you. <3!

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box_in_the_box March 30 2008, 11:13:36 UTC
Very in-character and very, very sexy.

You have earned yourself a link to this Donna Noble pr0n fanart:

What if Donna had materialized in the TARDIS just a few hours earlier?

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reserve March 30 2008, 20:59:19 UTC
ZOMG. THAT IS BOTH RIDICULOUS AND AWESOME. I AM BEYOND WORDS.

Thanks...for that, and for reading.

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box_in_the_box March 30 2008, 22:01:22 UTC
I love the fact that it looks exactly like her, facial features and irresistibly chubby-curvy body included, and that her reaction is exactly what you'd expect in canon.

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netgirl_y2k March 30 2008, 14:13:48 UTC
Very funny and very sexy!

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reserve March 30 2008, 20:58:09 UTC
That's what I was hoping for! Thank you <3.

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