FIC: Stay (Yagyuu-centric, R)

[reposte]

Author: Ociwen
Title: Stay
Wordcount: 8800
Rating: R
Warnings: Chinese food and dinosaurs.
Disclaimer: The Prince of Tennis is owned by Konomi Takeshi. No profit is made from this piece of fan fiction.
Summary: Niou disappears one day. Yagyuu isn't sure if he cares.
Author's Notes: Thanks to illuminations and longleggedgit, as well as koneko_meow for the beta. This fic was written for

Comments

[kai882]

I think I may have literally gone "meep ;_;" at some stages of this fic.

This is amazing. One of the best I ever read, I think. The way you captured so much emotion without even once having to bluntly tell us what we should feel - seriously, wow. I would've gone and reread it the minute I finished if I wasn't afraid of feeling too lonely the second time around. Thank you. ♥

Do you mind if I friend you? Your reposoir user, I mean. I know you keep some of your works in progress friends only, and I would really love to read them. If that's okay with you, of course. ^^

[reposoir]

*wibbles* Thank you so very much for the kind words!

Sure, feel free to friend me, if you like. I apologize about taking so long to respond to your comment.

Anon Revealed

[doovlynsidhe]

So....I figured it was time to make a non-anon post. :-D

What I liked most about this is how this story really showcases your amazing use of details. All the little details you put in to a fic really pull the entire story together and make reading it an experience.

This fic made me a little teary and it did have a melancholy tone to it, but then again, I think a pair like D1 with all their depth and inner workings wouldn't have a light tone to them, it just wouldn't....really work.

Wonderful job as always!

Re: Anon Revealed

[reposoir]

Thank you so very much, non-Anon! ;) I'm so glad that you were able to understand the intent of the tone of this fic. *wibbles and offers kleenex*

[decollement]

Um, like. I think I like this best out of anything I've read by you, it is melancholy and beautiful and heart-breaking and my functional productivity for the night just! died! ): But really, gorgeous.

[reposoir]

*wibbles*

Thank you so much for the kind words! I am so glad that you think so highly of this fic! :)

[reposoir]

Aw, thank you! :)