Coffee

[reogulus]

title: Coffee
pairing: Mark/Eduardo
rating: PG-13
summary: Those little things are the only things to be counted for. And Mark still can't sleep.
disclaimer: Don't own nothing here.
word count: 704

Comments

[leopardchic79]

Very awesome! I never usually like 2nd person narrative, but this was perfect. Great job!

[reogulus]

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it!
I tried to write this fic in third person at first, but second person actually flows better :)

[tafidadarling]

Very interesting. And I won't lie. I'm a sucker for second person narratives like this. Little snipets work best, and you did it perfectly. ♥

[reogulus]

Thank you ♥
I'm a sucker for dreaming up these snipets.

[tafidadarling]

You're welcome.
Me too. I'm too addicted to drabbles. :)

[16littleseconds]

2nd person narrative = ♥
I just loved this, really really much. This was beautiful, I loved that Mark caught all these details about Eduardo, but kept them secretly to himself :')

[reogulus]

Glad you enjoyed it ♥
Sometimes I just wished Mark would've said something, anything. But secrets are easier to keep than words.

[nebulein]

Just watched the movie yesterday and am still surprised I've managed to find fanfic for it. ;)

Nicely written, love the underlying longing.
You had told the Winklevi that the majority of your attention was back at the Facebook headquarters, and that was true, except when Eduardo was in the room.

Love the last sentence, too.

[reogulus]

Oh! I'm so honoured to have written one of the first fics you've read in this fandom! :D And I really loved writing the ending sentence, too.

[nikkikoala90]

I liked this! Heartbreaking, truly. . Things that you refused to toss out, like the T-shirt he got you for your nineteenth birthday THAT LINE GOT TO ME. Great job!

[reogulus]

So glad you liked it! ♥
The T-shirt may have been Wardo's first attempt at trying to improve Mark's sense of fashion.