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Jan 15, 2007 23:44
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allfireburns
January 19 2007, 01:50:04 UTC
That was lovely. Just... the description, and the characterization of April and everything... Love. I'd say more, but... I can't find anything to criticize. ♥
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varymydays
January 19 2007, 22:29:39 UTC
Oh wow, so sexual and... fantastic.
Seriously.
Loved the description and the characterization. Loved it all. ^_^ Especially how seductive and in control April is.
It's so dirty and hot that they're having sex in the alley after his show... It's really just... sexy in this dangerous way.
Lot's of wonderful imagery and conciseness.
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Seriously.
Loved the description and the characterization. Loved it all. ^_^ Especially how seductive and in control April is.
It's so dirty and hot that they're having sex in the alley after his show... It's really just... sexy in this dangerous way.
Lot's of wonderful imagery and conciseness.
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