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[mmmfishfingers]

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Title: Blue and White
Author: Chico (lost_for_jack)
Rating: G/PG
Word Count: 525
Summary: Childhood friends spend a day together. And speak without saying words. I suck at summaries, can you tell?
Notes: I don’t own anything. I love comments more than I love love.

Comments

[geeky_ginger]

That was really great....and unfortunately it would seem I'm not gonna have the time to write one for this week...well, unless I scramble and write it tonight and tomorrow after class.

Either way..I liked this and the comparison you had with the scarf.

Great work.

[mmmfishfingers]

Thank you!
I wrote it out and the ending was completely different than what I have here. So when I typed it out, this happened and I liked it better. The scarf thing was so not in the first draft but I really enjoyed it.

[geeky_ginger]

Yeah the scarf thing is what made it stick out to me....it's was meaningful and fitting.

[mmmfishfingers]

Thank you. I really am glad the way it turned out for a five-minute scribble! :)

[singingchipmunk]

Awww... that was sooo cute! You love Marky! That's adorable. If only he was real. xDD

This story was very cute, and I like the way you used the scarf as a metaphor for the two of you. Very clever. Bravo!

[mmmfishfingers]

Thank you! I'm glad I finally wrote a happy!Mark .. or at least not emo...haha
I love the scarf too.. glad it spewed from my brain just in time :)
Thanks again!