Oooooooh Bri has a whole Aragorn thang going thar, and I reeeally liked the desc of the skeletons and the way time froze when they burst in leaving the stain on the ground where they walked
Vial = Vile, Vial = a test tube or botle Vile = bad, evil, grotesque
it hissed, "It has only just begun..." Oooooh creepy!
I really like how all the fairy tale kingdoms are on the same planet, very kewl!
Warren and Wren kewl twin names *G*
Plus Soren as their dad *L*
I likee Maren it works well as an ending or the beginning of something larger :) Love the angstiness too :)
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*GLOMP* so so so so so so good!
((((((((((((((((((((((Maren))))))))))))))))))))))))) wonderful writer, you are! -^_______________^-
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::glomps back::
~ Maren
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Vial = Vile, Vial = a test tube or botle
Vile = bad, evil, grotesque
it hissed, "It has only just begun..." Oooooh creepy!
I really like how all the fairy tale kingdoms are on the same planet, very kewl!
Warren and Wren kewl twin names *G*
Plus Soren as their dad *L*
I likee Maren it works well as an ending or the beginning of something larger :) Love the angstiness too :)
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Very nice story hun
Nikolle
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