[Fic] Hanging on that shadow of your reality - Part 2

[rennie_88]

Title: Hanging on that shadow of your reality
Pairing(s): Jaechunmin
Length: 2/3
Rating: PG-13
Warnings:  slight language, confusingness?
Genre: AU, drama, angst, angst, angst
Summary: When dreams are more attractive than reality, who can blame him for wanting to lose himself within them forever?

Part 1

A/N:s omg, i cant believe this part is longer than 10

Comments

[heavlee]

Hi :)

Okay, this fic woke up so many thoughts in me that I want to give it a well-built comment, so I will come back tonight and tell you what I think about it.

If you don't like loooong comments, then let me know now!!! Because I feel like writing a whole novel here!!:)

Till later :)

[rennie_88]

hehe im very long winded myself if u cant tell by the story length so i love novel commenting too hahaha :P but i'd love to hear ur thoughts ~ (cuz i think the topic is interesting anyway hehehe)
thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment too <3

[heavlee]

Hey

[heavlee]

P.S.:(oh, and no offense to anyone, I have nothing against smut, but I swear I love this even more because it has no smut. It shows that you don't need it to write really good fics. Indeed the best fics I read till now are really full of it when they are not completely based on it. And I can understand it since dealing with desires and body brings a looot of possibilities for angst as well as feelings, and it is (in my opinion) easier to write well than when you don't take support on it. I'm sure if I wrote fic with smut it would definitely come out better than the ones I did till now, with only "silly feelings and events". Of course, I know it is only my way to see it. Maybe most people find it harder to write than "my kind of fic". It doesn't matter, I like everything, and everyone can like what they want :)

bye :) and sorry for the novel :) I had to cut it to be able to post it :)

[miruu_kira]

yaaaay!!
Like what i said,
i got more understand in this chapter,
but i just want to make sure, chun first fall in love was with jae or with min??
The things that i catch there was he first fall in love with jae then he also start fall in love with min too,
i still can't get why chun admit himself being jaejae??

[rennie_88]

ummm i think he kinda fell in love with them at the same time :S its hard to say exactly hehe
cuz chun was in a coma and jae's conscious 'possessed' his body and met min. and jaemin fell in love, but chun was also in the back of his mind to fall together..ummm wait.. im getting confused trying to explain it hahahaha! chun didn't admit to being jae, though, because all that time jae was inside his body being 'jae' but with chun's physical appearance................TT wish i could put in pictures to make it easier to understand haha
anyway its just jaechunmin love everywhere so its ok right?

[miruu_kira]

thank you so much for explaining more to me, hehehe, its not confusing me, i got it now,
yaaay, the important was they got happy together, hehehehe,