Chapter X L'ETRE ET L'AME -- A Twilight Fanfiction
Thanks to Ava Sinclair for her wonderful Beta
CHAPTER X
Dusk again, and Bella’s hands no longer glittered on the steering wheel. It had taken only three hours on the road for her to decide where she was headed. Or, if Bella had been honest with herself, she had known from the moment she slipped the key into the ignition.
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Irina's death will be an irredeemable loss to Bella, just as hers is to Jasper. You truly grasp the essence of tragedy here.
By the way I love your Bella, in all her wholeness, with weakness and great love both.
~~ She didn’t mention how she had all but driven Irina away, feeling the weight of that drop into her belly like an anvil. ~~
~~ Something in the woods seemed to claw at her and pull her into the gathering darkness. Edward was out there, Jasper and Carlisle. Bella wanted to save them all. ~~
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Your turns of phrase are absolutely stunning:
~~ The Denali sisters? Had it been them on the drive? Had they followed her after all? Of course they had, and it was with terror, rather than gratitude that Bella accepted this obvious fact of their caring for her. ~~
One of many.
Rip me up.
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