"Breathless", Jack/Juliet

[renna_esprit]

Title: Breathless
Author: Renna, renna_esprit
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jack/Juliet with hints of Ben/Juliet
Spoilers: third season, after “The Glass Ballerina”
Disclaimer: not mine
Special thanks to Neddle my wonderful beta ^_^
A/N: I'm searching for beta for my other jacket fic. If you like that one and if you have some free time, give me a hand, please.

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Comments

[dariac]

Imaginative and poetic.Great story.

[renna_esprit]

Thank you!

[do_not_confess]

*ded*
In honour of this ship that is really starting to grow on me, I have pulled out my only Jack/Juliet icon uploaded now (stupid non paid account), even tho it doesn't really fit the mood of the story. It was wonderful. So deep and poetic and it has so many layers I have to read it again.
This passage stood out to me most:
And there’re also three more words, but she says them silently as if she’s afraid, that someone will hear and learn it.

Heartbreakingly beautiful. *sigh*

[renna_esprit]

Oh, thank you so much for your lovely feedback!
*smile*
I'm so glad you like it.

[neddle]

The only thing I can say: "I love you, darling")))

[renna_esprit]

And I love you too *hug*