Comments | renisanz: fic: "Back Home" [Pt.12]

renisanz

fic: "Back Home" [Pt.12]

Dec 31, 2008 11:29

Title: Back Home - Pt. 12
Author: renisanz
Summary: Settling down won't be easy for either of them. A sequel to “Making Up the Past.” Ronon/Keller.
Category: Romance/Drama
Rating: PG-13
Words: 2,064
Beta: journeyman07
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: I don't own 'em, but they're fun to play, not for profit.

( As they pulled into the lot in front of the medical center, Jennifer became particularly antsy at Ronon's side. )

fan: fic, series: making up the past, pairing: ronon/keller, character: ronon dex, character: jennifer keller, fandom: sga

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renisanz January 1 2009, 03:35:38 UTC

Ha, yeah. She's definitely spunky. :)

theporchlife January 7 2009, 21:05:11 UTC

Nice work on this chapter - every chapter gets more intense and I'm dying to know what is going to happen next. I'm also not-so-secretly hoping for a story about Rachel winding up on Atlantis (don't ask me how) and just telling everyone what she thinks. I bet she'd really love to have a go at describing Sheppard's hair...

renisanz January 7 2009, 22:04:18 UTC

LOL. Yeah, Rachel was a totally random character I created. I had planned on having a male cousin accompany Joanna...we see how that worked out...

So, I will be including her more in the story 'cuz it's fun to have that character that always says what's on their mind.

sezjara January 13 2009, 03:12:30 UTC

First off, I'm sorry it's taken me this long to comment. Life and all that...

Second, good job!! Aside from a few minor spelling errors, I like this chapter. I like Jen's family, too. They fit together. I really like Rachel. ;) (hehe) She's very perceptive, very outgoing. I like that she picks up on things so easily. It's not very often that we see a surprised Ronon.

If not for the sterile, bland setting, her father seemed right at home, having falling asleep working the crossword puzzle in the Sunday issue of the New York TimesLOL!! My grandmother used to always fall asleep where she was sitting, be it on her couch, or at church. I would nudge her awake she would look over at me sheepishly ( ... )

renisanz January 14 2009, 19:42:59 UTC

Thanks sezj. Honestly, I'm having a hard time finishing this story, so it's good to have encouragement and know that it's working. Hopefully I can get this thing done by the early part of this year. :)

How's the job search?

sezjara January 14 2009, 22:18:17 UTC

You're welcome!

Just keep on writing. I'm sure it'll work itself out. Persistence is key, or something like that. If I know you, and I'm pretty sure I do, you'll do your best and get it written as soon as you can.

As for the job search, it's not easy. There are lots of people wanting work, and lots of jobs available. Too bad I'm not qualified for most of them. I do have a couple of friends keeping their eyes and ears open for me, so hopefully I'll find something soon. I'm also thinking I might have to start looking at jobs out of town. Not my original plan, but it may be my only option. We'll see.

I'll keep you updated.

Thanks girl! Good luck with your projects!

renisanz January 14 2009, 22:54:00 UTC

I can definitely relate to the job search. There are actually some jobs available in my field, but I've gotten rather comfortable at my current job and am just getting over the fear or branching out. I've a few prospects though, which is cool.

I think I'll send you a little something to tide you over til I get my fic posted. ;)

wander_lust_79 January 23 2009, 03:54:01 UTC

this is so good...Oh no is this Dr from Jen's past going to cause troubles for the couple!!! ekkk!

I love this..so good!

renisanz January 23 2009, 20:58:52 UTC

Thanks. Yeah, I think a bit more drama is in store.

I Have Loved Reading Your Story!!! anonymous August 13 2009, 21:39:00 UTC

I have loved reading your story. I wanted Ronon and Jennifer to get together ever since their "almost-kiss" during the lock-down, and was very disappointed when they didn't, so it is nice to see how it could have been between them.

Your writing is excellent, specially the way you describe the kissing and hugging moments that they share. The detail that you put into it, makes me want to have the "Dex/Keller Love" that you have created.

I am wondering. when it is that you will post the next chapter?? I am dying to find out what happens next!!!

Re: I Have Loved Reading Your Story!!! renisanz August 13 2009, 21:49:30 UTC

Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Comments like yours help remind me how bad I've been for letting this story languish for all these months.

There is, however, one more chapter - I must have forgotten to link it. I'll have to remedy that: Chapter 13

I hope to get going on this story very soon. Unfortunately, your review is anonymous, so I hope you get this message. :/