Escaping Paradise 2/2

Jul 31, 2012 19:13

Title:Escaping Paradise Part Two
Pairing:2woo + side pairings
Rating:R
Disclaimer:I don't own Infinite sadly...T_T
Summary:When their bus breaks down and leaves them stranded, seven strangers find themselves staying at a motel with a dangerous history

Part One

'Can we change our minds now and just sleep in the bus?' )

fic length: oneshot, fandom: infinite, pair: 2woo, fanfiction

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yeonah July 31 2012, 23:26:27 UTC
I love the ending to this...it was just such a twist, even betaing it I was like 'WTF REALLY???'

Really happy she was a good ghost, poor girl :( /hugs her

And the boys were so cute xD

Really really proud of you unnie for pulling this off, you did it~!!!!! And you did it so well~~~~

Hugs forever from your baby sis! <333

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renichifreak July 31 2012, 23:36:26 UTC
you were a huge help, bb...couldn't have done it without you, seriously...

/cuddles you forever and ever

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yeolna July 31 2012, 23:29:49 UTC
You already know what I think of this buuut I'll say it again hehe. I loved it! And it was no problem checking it, it was my pleasure. ^_^ Congrats on writing 16k! maybe I will be able to do that one day lmao

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renichifreak July 31 2012, 23:33:52 UTC
you can do it, bb~~~ \\o//

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svtstarlight August 3 2012, 20:19:56 UTC
Whoa O.O Totally didn't see that coming. Awesome story tho, but you always write so well <3
Such an interesting plot twist...wow. *in awe* <333

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renichifreak August 3 2012, 21:08:13 UTC
T_____T

I miss Tsuki comments on my fics.../cuddles you

glad you liked it, bb, and there's no need to be in aww...

-///-

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svtstarlight August 3 2012, 21:41:34 UTC
Totally do, cuz that ending, sheer BRILLIANCE. I'm serious. I wanna learn how to do that. <3

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renichifreak August 3 2012, 21:52:27 UTC
desperation, bb...it does wonders

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re_lla August 6 2012, 09:40:51 UTC
IT’S ALL YOUR FAULT!

Each frame showed a woman-the same woman that was memorialized in the lobby. And with each shot, she got closer and closer.

he saw the ghost that DongWoo had seen slowly working her way down the stairs toward him. With every step closer she got, WooHyun took one back until he jumped when his back met the wall.

; A ; ...... these lines scared me to death askd;aslkda;sds
but you're so genius to create the past story when they were just a child and make it all make sense to this present
them all connected from the beginning ten years ago and also relate to jieun from the beginning to ; ;
at first i feel so frightened but the last part make me crt because of lonely and poor jieun T T
rest well now girl ...

thank you so much for this brilliant fic ! ; v ;

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renichifreak August 6 2012, 15:00:27 UTC
XDDD

To be honest with you, I have no idea what gave me the idea of creating a chaos theory for the plot...I guess I h=just have to make everything far more complicated than it really needs to be...OTL

sorry that I scared you and made you cry...D: /cuddles you

and thanks for being such an awesome reader~~ ;;~;;

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renichifreak December 12 2012, 03:44:47 UTC
Only I can sign up for something and decide to use a Chaos Theory for the plot...OTL

MyungSoo did too~ my sufbb feelz came out on that one~hehehe

I do tend to hook up multiple people, but this time I really decided to go for more realism despite the supernatural plot

yeah...you can read any of my fics and figure out my bias right away...LOLOLOL...and I LOVE THAT WORD~~~~

YAY for being pimped out in a good way~~~ \\o//

I really don't know...I;ve only had it here and on dashi...

and I love you for commenting~

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