[FIC] Cover You

[renegadewriter8]

Title: Cover You (1631 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types, Transformers (Bay Movies)
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Sideswipe/Ironhide
Characters: Ironhide, Sideswipe, Lennox, Epps, Ratchet
Additional Tags: Community: tf_rare_pairing, tf-rare-pairing

Comments

[ravynfyre]

Nice characterization, good descriptive language, fun premise... But nothing jars me out of a fic so quick as seeing Animated continuity only terminology used in a non-Animated fic... Also, G1 "accents" used on Bayverse characters who did not have that accent.

(servos, in case you didn't understand that complaint. A "servo" is a "servomotor", responsible for moving small parts, like facial feature. Bots and Con's used the term " Hand/s" in the books, comics, and on screen.)

[renegadewriter8]

ohoo I did not know that. I thought since everyone was using it was just canon XD Thanks for the review =)

[fuzipenguin]

Nicely done! I liked that moment where it sunk into Sideswipe just what his death would do to Sunstreaker and Ironhide.

[renegadewriter8]

Thanks! Yeah in this situation Sides can't be all, "I don't care, I'd gladly die beside you" because it's not just his life on the line. And then of course now he has Hide to worry about.

Thanks a ton for the review =)