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renegadewriter8

[FIC] Forbidden

Jan 03, 2012 22:49

Title: Forbidden (2246 words) by

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character: jazz, rating: mature, 2012, status: complete, challenge, genre: angst, character: prowl, 'writing: fanfiction, type: challenge response, 'fandom: transformers, community: tf rare pairing, warnings: sticky, type: oneshots, character: sunstreaker, pairing: sunstreaker/prowl, world: g1, relationship: slash

Comments 22

wicked3659 January 4 2012, 06:13:02 UTC

This was really well done. Very nice fic! You captured the emotional intensity of the moment.

renegadewriter8 January 5 2012, 16:16:44 UTC

^.^ Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

thalanee January 4 2012, 10:22:51 UTC

wow... that was so beautifully written!

The detail of what Jazz witnessed during the whole story made it perfect.

And you gotta love him for vowing to get them together more often!

renegadewriter8 January 5 2012, 16:17:52 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm almost, ALMOST tempted to write a tiny drabble. But no.. *looks at writing goals list* NOOOOO! XD

Hhaha Glad you liked it! ^^

fianna9 January 4 2012, 11:09:24 UTC

You did a great job showing all the details in behavior that Jazz was suddenly able to see. Very well done.

renegadewriter8 January 5 2012, 16:18:15 UTC

Thanks! ^^

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renegadewriter8 January 5 2012, 16:21:36 UTC

*squee* YEY! So glad you liked this! Thanks so much for the review ^^

eerian_sadow January 4 2012, 19:59:18 UTC

oh this is beautiful! tragic, but beautiful. i LOVE Jazz here; he gets what it should really be all about.

renegadewriter8 January 5 2012, 16:40:14 UTC

^^ Thanks! They were really lucky that is was Jazz who saw them. So glad you liked this ^.^