Comments | renegadewriter8: [FIC] Draconta (Part Two)

renegadewriter8

[FIC] Draconta (Part Two)

Nov 17, 2011 00:28

Title: Draconta (10962 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Jazz/Prowl
Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Ratchet, Optimus - Character, Ironhide, Bluestreak, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe, Red Alert
Additional Tags: AU, Everyone is a Dragon ( Read more... )

character: jazz, rating: teen, genre: romance, character: ratchet, genre: hurt/comfort, status: complete, 'series: draconta, relationship: gen, character: prowl, 'writing: fanfiction, type: series, world: au, 'fandom: transformers, verse: au, type: drabbles, genre: fluff, pairing: jazz/prowl, 2011, relationship: slash

Comments 12

*sighs happily* darkeyes_17 November 17 2011, 07:11:29 UTC

So beautiful to see. I love how they support each other. It was so cute, I love how they acted towards each other. And the mating scene was beautiful and hot at the same time.

Love this so much <3

Re: *sighs happily* renegadewriter8 November 18 2011, 01:39:01 UTC

So happy you liked this! This part made me suffer SO much, glad it came out alright ^.^

Thanks for the review!

camfield November 17 2011, 08:19:32 UTC

So sweet and hot! From cuddles and kisses to sexy times, very satisfactory indeed!

The mating scene was beautiful, just right for the story!

renegadewriter8 November 18 2011, 01:39:34 UTC

Teehee, thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

sideslip_tf November 17 2011, 14:16:46 UTC

Wow! I don't know much about dragon interactions but this was delightful.

renegadewriter8 November 18 2011, 01:40:05 UTC

^.^ Thanks!

thalanee November 17 2011, 15:48:26 UTC

The first flight part was so funny (especially with Ratchet's commentary) and the confession absolutely perfect. The shy confused way Prowl answered was adorable beyond words.
As good as the previous chapters!

renegadewriter8 November 18 2011, 01:48:52 UTC

HAHAHA Ratchet has little patience for romantics. For now. (oho teaser! XD)

^.^I wasn't sure if that part would be liked because it kinda happened fast, but I didn't want to get too much into it or I would have ended with chapters and chapters XD

So glad you liked it! Thanks a ton for the review!

pxjloverkyoto November 18 2011, 02:37:26 UTC

Awww, this was so sweet~!! Their shyness was pure fluffy goodness~ Loved it~!! <3

And the smut scene was great, and don't worry, practice makes perfect~!! X3

renegadewriter8 November 20 2011, 02:33:34 UTC

Yey! So glad you liked this part! Was actually not my fav but, meeh I did my best ^.^

Sticky scene was based on a sticky dragon art I found, but I still couldn't seem to be happy with the sticky part! T.T

Must. Practice!! XD

Thanks for the review!!