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renegadewriter8

[FIC] Song Drabble - Too Late

Oct 31, 2011 23:57

Title: Too Late (821 words)
Fandom: Transformers Generation One, Transformers - All Media Types
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Jazz/Prowl
Characters: Prowl, Jazz
Additional Tags: One Sided Love, Angst, Song fic
Author's Note:
- Request fic written for moonlightbeam305 on FFNet.
Song: Who ( Read more... )

pairing: 'one sided, genre: drama, character: jazz, media: song, rating: teen, genre: hurt/comfort, status: complete, genre: angst, character: prowl, 'writing: fanfiction, relationship: one sided, 'fandom: transformers, type: request, type: song-fic, world: g1, 2011

Comments 10

pjlover666 November 1 2011, 19:15:23 UTC

*teared up* God, this is so sad. Poor, poor Prowl *hugs him* Well, I can't really blame Jazz, I mean we can't MAKE someone love but still...Anyway a very WELL written drabble! I loved reading it ^^

renegadewriter8 November 1 2011, 19:26:03 UTC

I know! Un requited love sucks so much! T.T I'm glad you liked this!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

lobaeclipse November 1 2011, 21:38:19 UTC

There is something wrong with this fic! The end is all borked! It's supposed to be happy!

Argh, this is lovely and beautiful and sad, even the end. Poor, sad, awkward little mechs. I want to hug them.

renegadewriter8 November 7 2011, 20:14:40 UTC

Ejj late reply XD

I'm glad you liked this! T.T Yup poor Prowl! *hugs*

Thanks for the review!

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renegadewriter8 November 7 2011, 20:15:14 UTC

T.T I know! I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for the review!!

fianna9 November 1 2011, 21:58:22 UTC

Terribly sad but well written. There is something I can blame Jazz for...running away. Even if he knew he'd never love Prowl the same way, he threw away a good friendship (even if Prowl was someday hoping for more, he would have been content with staying friends).

renegadewriter8 November 7 2011, 20:18:31 UTC

Yup, Jazz reacted bad. After all the trouble he went through to get Prowl out of his shell to just abandon him like that was awful of him.

I'm glad you liked this!! ^.^

Thanks for the review!

neverminetohold November 2 2011, 10:03:48 UTC

I love this, because I'm constantly hearing the song playing in the background, so that really enhances the mood (originally, the song was recced to me as part of my Dean/Castiel obsession ^-^).

It's sad, the ending, but hey, it's what is to be expected, with that particular song as inspiration. Although... hm, I would have prefered if they had at least salvaged their friendship...

And I don't agree with PJlover666 - we're constanly vying for someones love/affection and at least in fiction, we even try to force others to love us, which makes so interesting plots ^-^

renegadewriter8 November 7 2011, 20:20:21 UTC

Ohoo I went through a Dean/Castiel phase too XD

I know, Jazz was a coward in this one, leaving Prowl like that T.T

Glad you like it! Thanks for the review!! ^.^

neverminetohold November 7 2011, 20:41:24 UTC

You're welcome as always ^-^

Yeah, Cas/Dean hit me big time and I still have some fanfiction's in my folder that I re-read from time to time. But I'm no longer up to date, because here in Germany, SPN is only aired up to Season 5 (? - Sam/Lucifer + Michael in the cage but out anyway...?) and who knows when it will be continued.

But their eye-fucking was just awesome LOL Did you ever read the ship manifesto "Because God commanded it"? That spoke really from the bottom of my heart.