[FIC] Haunted

[renegadewriter8]

Title: Haunted (1364 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types, Transformers Generation One
Rating: Mature
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings, Graphic Depictions Of Violence
Relationships: Ratchet & Sunstreaker & Sideswipe
Characters: Ratchet, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe
Additional Tags: Graphic Description of

Comments

[darkeyes_17]

Oh dear Primus...

definitely spooky, having all that slipped through your fingers remind you of your 'failure.' So very well written, and you can feel Ratchet's growing horror and despair, and his anguish.

[renegadewriter8]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!! Wasn't so sure it came out as creepy as it looked in my mind XD

Thanks for the review!

[velvet_infinity]

Oh! Great Halloween story! I feel for Ratchet.

Loved that ending ^^

Ratchet snorted, before another thought occurred to him.

"How the frag did you get into my quarters?"

The smirks fell right off.

Pfffft~

Try explaining THAT one, boys >D

[renegadewriter8]

XD Oh yes. They're going to have a tough time explaining THAT oneXD

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

[darkeyes_17]

Umm...just a question...how come there aren't posted in the comm?

[renegadewriter8]

XD just posted them. Wanted to make sure I didn't write anything else so I could just post them all in one go and not hog all the space with several posts XD

Oh and.. I might have gotten sidetracked with watching The Walking Dead *cough**cough* XD

[mmouse15]

The dream was creepy. Nicely written, holy smokes, I was just as scared as Ratchet!

In the second part, the twins have words of wisdom that are very good. I love the second to last line - "How the frag did you get into my quarters?" - that made me LOL!

[renegadewriter8]

Poor Ratchet must deal with his demons, but now the twins are there to chase them away!

LOL After they stop being chased by Ratchet, cause he's not happy with them at the moment! XD

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!