[FIC] Together We Are Strong

Oct 31, 2011 16:12

Title: Together We Are Strong (700 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers Generation One, Transformers - All Media Types
Rating: Not Rated
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Sunstreaker/Ratchet/Sideswipe
Characters: Sunstreaker, Sideswipe, Ratchet
Additional Tags: Trigger Warning: Miscarriage, Angst, Hurt/ ( Read more... )

character: ratchet, rating: mature, status: complete, warnings: trigger, challenge, genre: angst, pairing: sunstreaker/ratchet/sideswipe, community: twins_x_ratch, 'writing: fanfiction, type: challenge response, 'fandom: transformers, type: oneshots, character: sunstreaker, character: sideswipe, 2011, relationship: slash

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velvet_infinity October 31 2011, 21:57:57 UTC
You made me cry. I'm still crying....

Poor Ratchet...

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renegadewriter8 November 1 2011, 00:17:47 UTC
T.T *Offers tissues*

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darkeyes_17 October 31 2011, 23:04:02 UTC
Aww....*sniff sniff* Poor Ratchet. THere can be nothing worse than wanting a child/sparkling so badly, and get that close to having it in his arms, and then losing it. Absolutely devastating.

Wonderful angst fic.

I really liked how you made them all cope with it together, because they're all hurting and they need to support each other.

Poor Ratchet...that he's a medic made it so much worse...

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renegadewriter8 November 1 2011, 00:19:21 UTC
*offers tissue*

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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ffdemon November 1 2011, 00:42:10 UTC
This....is heartbreaking, but you get the emotion just right. Not to much. This is a well write and respectful story. Congradulation on that.

How the twins are trying to cope with they own pain and they mate one it touching. They all hurt, but they want to support their mate.

I lost a baby in a way not so different of them. The pain and regret Ratchet feel it presice. Again touching and respectful

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renegadewriter8 November 1 2011, 19:21:16 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. It's always hard writing things like this, because although I would never be disrespectful with something like this, others might find offense. So I'm glad you thought this was okay.

*hugs* I'm sorry to hear that, my mom also lost her baby before I was adopted.

Thanks for the review!

*hugs again*

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mmouse15 November 1 2011, 02:55:31 UTC
You handled this well. It's never easy, losing a child, but the love and support Ratchet got from the twins is very well done.

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renegadewriter8 November 1 2011, 19:22:24 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked this. ^.^

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