Comments | renegadewriter8: [FIC] Reasons To Believe

renegadewriter8

[FIC] Reasons To Believe

Sep 17, 2011 01:51

Title: Reasons to Believe (1402 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types, Transformers Generation One
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Jazz & Prowl
Characters: Jazz, Prowl
Series: Part 3 of Masked
Author's Notes:
- Written for the prowlxjazz anniversary challenge ( Read more... )

character: jazz, warnings: mention or graphic child abuse, 'series: masked, rating: general, genre: hurt/comfort, status: complete, bond: family, challenge, community: prowlxjazz, relationship: gen, type: series, character: prowl, 'writing: fanfiction, type: challenge response, 'fandom: transformers, challenge: anniversary challenge '11, world: g1, 2011

Comments 17

thalanee September 17 2011, 08:47:47 UTC

A wonderful story!

And a good way to illustrate the reason the question "Why did God let this happen?" is so silly. I have to keep from shaking people every time they ask and not yell at them that they have free will, that it's not a deity's fault what's wrong with this world.

The small miracles part made me smile, Jazz is completely right about that.

And the last bit was a perfect way to offset the more serious part. Ending it with that laugh made it even better!

renegadewriter8 September 17 2011, 23:55:39 UTC

Thanks!

I know right!? I also feel like that when someone blames God for everything bad in the world, but then that same person yells at a friend or doesn't help out much.

I'm a big believer that we receive small miracles everyday even if we don't see them. We have to find the good things in our day.m=)

hahaha I wasn't sure is that sudden laugh would fit with the fic, I'm glad it did! And really, it is a very good example that Primus really does exist! XP

Thanks for the review!

fianna9 September 17 2011, 10:23:29 UTC

Prowl has many legitimate questions considering what Scheme did to him, and Jazz handled his concerns very well with the right mixture of humor and seriousness. Well done.

renegadewriter8 September 17 2011, 23:57:34 UTC

Even though Jazz was clam, he was thinking up ways to torture Shockwave whenever they crossed paths again.

Prowl never got a good education, Scheme not thinking it important, and with all the chaos it kinda slipped Blue's mind.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

cmdrtekk September 17 2011, 14:38:11 UTC

You did a good job of providing an answer to this serious question.

Perfect touch of humor at the end to end on an extremly high note and still keeping in line with the scene itself.

Thank you for sharing.

renegadewriter8 September 17 2011, 23:58:33 UTC

I was so worried the last line would ruin the fic! I'm so happy you liked it!

Thanks for the review!

darkeyes_17 September 17 2011, 21:45:01 UTC

What an uplifting little fic. i really like how you answered that question of faith in such a wise way. I truly adored it.

Prowl is wonderful here. I really enjoy seeming this plot line, it's fantastic. \\Small miracles...so true, so true.

renegadewriter8 September 18 2011, 00:00:34 UTC

^.^Thank you. I was a bit worried it wouldn't be received well. Glad you liked it. Poor Prowl still has a long way to go, but even in these kind of serious situations he continues to grow. Again, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review!

bluebirdsoaring September 19 2011, 03:15:36 UTC

Very, very sweet =) No child wants to hear their parent was hurting them on purpose - but yep, Bluestreak is certainly sent by Primus!!! Love it!!!

renegadewriter8 September 20 2011, 18:36:28 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! Yup, Blue really is a gift. Thanks for the review!!