[FIC] My Precious One

[renegadewriter8]

Title: Precious One (2127 words) by ren
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types, Transformers Generation One
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Bluestreak, Ratchet
Additional Tags: Masked Verse, Mention of Child Abuse
Series: Part 2 of Masked
Author's Notes: -

Comments

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Poor Prowl, he is really suffering a lot. And honestly, I like the ending just as it is, especially since the main part of this story indicates that there is no resolution for poor Prowl as long as he has not become an adult. Therefore the not so happy end fits rather well, while the fact that Jazz is able to calm him into sleep and stays with him the whole time is like a small piece of hope. Jazz obviously develops into Prowl's anchors here.

Oh and I am happy that you wrote a second part for that one of the first week's entry. I wouldn't mind to see more pieces coming up in the future. ^^

[renegadewriter8]

I'm writing very angsty pieces lately, and other drabbles I'm planning are just as angsty or more. I'm becoming an angsty/drama writer nooooooooooooo!!! XD

But yeah, happiness doesn't usually happen over night. There are lots of trails one has to overcome to reach it. But those trials are a bit easier to deal with when you have someone by your side to help and guide you. Prowl, has Jazz.

Lucky bastard.

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Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Well, as you might have noticed, I went into the angst section as well. *sighs* I usually love drama as long as there is a happy ending or at least hope at the end of all things.
So, maybe you can become an angsty/drama writer with happy endings? XD

Exactly, happyness needs to develop and sometimes hard work is needed to be done before it can even happen at all.

Yes, Prowl is a rather happy bot, isn't he?

You are welcome. ^^

so touching

[darkeyes_17]

I'm glad you did a continuation, even though, if anything, it was more sad and upfront than the last piece. There is not a 'happy ending', but there doesn't have to be. There can be 'happy moments' in the future. I really loved the lullaby and seeing the concern from the three adult mechs.

*hugs Prowl* Poor baby. With Jazz now by your side, hopefully things will be a little better.

Re: so touching

[renegadewriter8]

It's true, I mentioned it before but, happy endings aren't always quick to come and one can suffer a lot before they reach it. Prowl still has a long way to go before his ever after. But he has help now and a loving family.

I noticed I left out Prime in both drabbles XD Might have to do a scene with them both sometime.

Thanks for reviewing!

[cmdrtekk]

ooh. That was quite intense.

Well written.

[renegadewriter8]

^.^Thank you. I'm gad you liked it!