Comments | renegadewriter8: [FIC] Enough

renegadewriter8

[FIC] Enough

Sep 09, 2011 21:32

Title: Enough (752 words)
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Transformers - All Media Types, Transformers Generation One
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: Author Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Relationships: Jazz/Prowl
Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Optimus Prime, Surprise Guest
Additional Tags: Pure Crack, Match Making Taken to Another Level
Author's Notes:
- prowlxjazz ( Read more... )

character: jazz, rating: general, genre: humor, status: complete, challenge, character: optimus prime, community: prowlxjazz, character: prowl, 'writing: fanfiction, type: challenge response, 'fandom: transformers, challenge: anniversary challenge '11, pairing: jazz/prowl, world: g1, 2011, relationship: slash

Comments 28

usagi_atemu_tom September 10 2011, 03:03:43 UTC

*lol* At the beginning I was wondering Ratchet, since he is known for his cursing. Then I realised the narrator must be a Decepticon, even before there was this little hint of him calling Jazz and Prowl "enemies". Then I wondered how funny it would be if the narrator was Megatron. Well, turns out it IS Megatron. And funny it was indee. I was laughing so hard. Especially with Optimus at the end of the chapter.
A great idea and a well written story. Loved it. XD

renegadewriter8 September 10 2011, 14:41:49 UTC

XP I'm glad I kept you guessing a bit. Hahaha I think Megs was channelling his inner Ratchet, there's one in every one of us O.O

Megs just has no patience for clueless mechs.

bluebirdsoaring September 10 2011, 03:07:41 UTC

It's a riot for sure!! I was guessing Starscream for a bit, but Megs is a twist =)

renegadewriter8 September 10 2011, 14:43:39 UTC

XD LOL I think Screamer was one of Megs target, getting him with his trine. It's we he doesn't full out betray him. Mech owes the tyrant his love life! *cackles*

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renegadewriter8 September 10 2011, 14:44:10 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

sideslip_tf September 10 2011, 03:13:32 UTC

I think my brain just locked up! I was expecting Ratchet with the colorful language. Wow, Megatron... A matchmaker?

Looked back at the story and now I am wondering what Megatron was doing watching soap operas. Hmmm, then imagining Megatron tossing Prowl and Jazz into that cave and the looks on their faceplates!

That was really funny and I like it.

renegadewriter8 September 10 2011, 14:45:44 UTC

hahaha yeah, it's Megatron's secret pleasure and why he's so pissed-off all the time. His fave characters never get together! XD Thanks for reading!

fianna9 September 10 2011, 03:44:42 UTC

Megatron playing matchmaker for Optimus and Elita as well as Jazz and Prowl? LIke bluebirdsoaring I was actually thinking of Starscream at first, but Megatron is even funnier. Awesome.

renegadewriter8 September 10 2011, 14:47:34 UTC

Before the war, when he was High Lord Protector, he couldn't stand see THE Prime all lovey dovey. Cybertron panicked when no one could find their Prime, only for him to appear with a femme the next joor. Megs is still feeling very much smug. XD

Glad you liked it!