Your first attempt at writing B/A, my first attempt at reading it. :) And a nice choice on my part. I just love your writing. You really do make Buffy tolerable for me. Love the touch of the blood/red wine thingy. (I'm too tired to think of words, sorry) As for the title (because I'm such a good help) I really like Bound. It ties in with the Angel/Buffy thing and Buffy/Spike hand-in-flames-thingy. Wow. I better stop now before I start saying nonsense.
Hee. *pets you* You're such a sweetie for even attempting to read this. I know how you feel about Buffy and I wouldn't have held it against you if you'd just passed it by. Glad you liked it though. Ares likes the title Bound too. So that may be what I go with.
Hey Renee, I see you took the plunge and posted this fic. You already know I think this is great, and one would not know that you have never written Buffy and Angel in one fic before.
The dead animal bodies are so creepy, the image is not one that goes away easily....*shivers*
Thank you. *G* Not a pairing I usually (or ever) write. I even had to kill Spike off to get him out of the way, otherwise it would have wound up Spuffy as the first draft did. ;P
Not a pairing I've EVER read before, but I think you did a wonderful job with it. Beautifully writen.
I'm sorry, but the hopeless Spuffy that I am just loved these lines:
Even now, weeks after, her left hand sometimes still tingled with the remembered fire of his soul. She laughed softly as recalled the faces of the people in the airport parking lot when her hand had suddenly burst into flame and all she‘d done was smile sadly. The connection had still been there and she had lived those last minutes with him; feeling the fierce joy in his soul as he‘d gone down for the final time.
Such beautiful words. I'm glad that you acknowledged Buffy's love for both Spike and Angel in this fic. Even though my heart belongs to Spuffy, the love Buffy has for Angel is very real, too.
Thank you so much for reading, especially as you don't read B/A. Even though it is B/A, I had to put something in there about Spike. And he had to be dead and out of the way or it would've went the Spuffy route. My mind just naturally goes there. :)
Hee. No worries. ;P Without spell check on the computer, nothing I ever wrote would be even remotely readable.
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Love the touch of the blood/red wine thingy. (I'm too tired to think of words, sorry)
As for the title (because I'm such a good help) I really like Bound. It ties in with the Angel/Buffy thing and Buffy/Spike hand-in-flames-thingy. Wow. I better stop now before I start saying nonsense.
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Ares likes the title Bound too. So that may be what I go with.
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I see you took the plunge and posted this fic. You already know I think this is great, and one would not know that you have never written Buffy and Angel in one fic before.
The dead animal bodies are so creepy, the image is not one that goes away easily....*shivers*
Kudos.
Ares...*hugs*
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I'm sorry, but the hopeless Spuffy that I am just loved these lines:
Even now, weeks after, her left hand sometimes still tingled with the remembered fire of his soul. She laughed softly as recalled the faces of the people in the airport parking lot when her hand had suddenly burst into flame and all she‘d done was smile sadly. The connection had still been there and she had lived those last minutes with him; feeling the fierce joy in his soul as he‘d gone down for the final time.
Such beautiful words. I'm glad that you acknowledged Buffy's love for both Spike and Angel in this fic. Even though my heart belongs to Spuffy, the love Buffy has for Angel is very real, too.
Well done!
Thank you. :)
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Hee. No worries. ;P Without spell check on the computer, nothing I ever wrote would be even remotely readable.
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