The Way Home

[renee2939]

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[evilawyer]

Still excellent, and now easier to read.

[renee2939]

*headdesk* Yes, LJ was being mean and made me tag every single paragraph break. Stupid LJ.

[petzipellepingo]

“Think I’m here to put you back together again,” he asks harshly. “How well does that ever work out? No, I’m fresh out of superglue. You’re looking for someone to fix your life and wrap it up for you in a nice, neat bow, go call one of your friends. If I remember rightly, they always did know best.”

“Maybe I don’t want someone to tell me how to fix things. Maybe I just want someone to tell me I’m not really broken, that I’m okay like this. That, that it’s okay to just be like this. For that, what I need is not a friend.”

“And we’ve never really been friends, have we?”
Ouch and very true. Nicely sad and bitter just like one would assume their reunion would be, no flinging into each other's arms for them. But a homecoming none the less.

[renee2939]

It all started out nice and light, but the more I worked on it the darker it seemed to get. Too much baggage there, I guess.

Ooh and you may have given me a title idea! :~)

[empresspatti]

Oy - this just breaks my heart at the same time it gives me a thrill.

[renee2939]

I didn't mean to break you. I did mean to thrill you- I'm not going to apologise for that. ;~) Glad you liked it, hon.

[moscow_watcher]

Wonderful story. I can easily imagine the three of them together.

[renee2939]

Thank you. Those three just work somehow- for me, anyway.

[makd]

Neat one!!

[renee2939]

Thanks! ;~D