Comments | renee2939: Missing You

renee2939

Missing You

May 19, 2006 22:35

Comments 10

makd May 20 2006, 04:30:43 UTC

ooh. thank you! I love this. May I send this to Chris Geary-Durrill? Chris doesn't do LJ.

and the last stanza is a heart-breaker.

renee2939 May 20 2006, 08:49:36 UTC

Hee. It's partly your fault I even tried it so I'm glad you liked it. :~) And that last bit is my favorite. As for sending it to Chris, I have no problem with that. The thing's out there, be silly of me to get all squeamish about it now, wouldn't it?

kcarolj65 May 20 2006, 10:52:57 UTC

Lovely and poignant. This is your first attempt at poetry? Keep with it, hon!

renee2939 May 21 2006, 02:46:26 UTC

Thanks, sweets. :~) First, and possibly last, attempt at poetry. I'm glad you liked it.

cal_turner May 20 2006, 12:00:37 UTC

This is so beautiful! Thank you for sharing it with us. :)

renee2939 May 21 2006, 02:50:26 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment. ;~) I'm glad you liked it.

empresspatti May 20 2006, 13:36:01 UTC

This was just so lovely and sad.

renee2939 May 21 2006, 02:52:28 UTC

Thank you! :~D

shinodabear May 20 2006, 14:55:04 UTC

Eee! I love it! First attempt at poetry, hon? It's wonderful. *big squishy hugs*

renee2939 May 21 2006, 02:54:52 UTC

First, maybe last, attempt at poetry. Glad it didn't blow chunks as badly as I thought it might when I posted it. :~D *squishes you back*