MAES 8: Love and Jealousy

Jul 15, 2012 12:24



AN: Jack’s illness and recovery after his trial in the bearskin is one that is only told retrospectively, in the next chapter. Yet I’ve often wondered what Stephen must have been feeling toward Jack at this time, considering the mess with Diana.

Love and Jealousy

Stephen sat, as he had been sitting for hours now, by Jack’s bed.

In fact, the bed was ( Read more... )

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esteven July 15 2012, 19:58:06 UTC
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*sighs happily*
You have written the h!Jack-c!Stephen that I craved, and again, it is totally within keeping of the characters and O'Brian's style. :D

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renaiya880727 July 15 2012, 23:31:47 UTC
For all that POB has a glut of injury scenes throughout the series, he's not very into H/C is he? I extend a few other scenes like this later on.

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esteven July 16 2012, 04:34:21 UTC
*nods*
And most hc fic is centered on h!Stephen/c!Jack which must have something to do with HMSS, but I am a glutton for h!Jack, so your fic has hit so many buttons at once.

Thank you again. :D

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heather_mist July 15 2012, 22:47:10 UTC
Beautifully written and utterly believable. Thank you!

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alltoseek July 17 2012, 19:02:39 UTC
Another excellent piece. There's been many fics addressing this missing time after the bear adventure, but none (that I recall) who tackle it quite this way - bringing in the discussion of the jealousy Stephen must be feeling over the whole Diana tangle. Stephen amusing himself at Jack's expense in the bear suit is perfectly in character and very much something POB would mention.

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rifleman_s July 17 2012, 19:53:18 UTC
"The professionalism he had always retained for others had been forgotten here. He could not remember ever praying so hard for a patient’s recovery. Nor had he been so insistent about not leaving their care to anyone else. All barriers that usually stood between physician and patient had been broken down, and part of Stephen was terrified to realize just how much this man still meant to him."

And there you have it - a wonderful insight into Stephen's feelings while for the present Jack remains wholly unaware.

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