Comments | remusxsirius: FIC- Alone in Some Queer Sunless Place, R/S, Complete

pigeongirl99 in remusxsirius

FIC- Alone in Some Queer Sunless Place, R/S, Complete

Oct 13, 2004 10:23

TITLE- Alone in Some Queer Sunless Place
PAIRING- Remus/Sirius
RATING- 15ish
SUMMARY- Remus, the first war, 'He stood alone in some queer sunless place/Where Armageddon ends.'
DISCLAIMER- J K Rowling owns the world, characters, and plot. Siegfried Sassoon owns the titles and gets all credit for inspiration. He also gets my love.

( Alone in Some Queer Sunless Place )

Comments 22

sunnyrea October 13 2004, 16:04:18 UTC

fantastic, all so desperate and sad and i love the disjoineted quality of it! Fantastic

pigeongirl99 October 14 2004, 08:58:07 UTC

I'm over the monn that you liked it, and appreciated the style.

Thanks so very much.

riverflame October 13 2004, 18:39:18 UTC

oh, wow. This is beautiful. It has this lovely, dreamlike quality to it, and it's so sad too.

This line was just perfect to me:

And the third sip of firewhiskey comes with the knowledge that some sorrows will not drown.

Ohhh, Remus! Painfully, wonderfully sad.

pigeongirl99 October 14 2004, 08:59:19 UTC

Thank you!

Just thanks for the lovely words and complements and especially for pointing out your favourite line, you've no idea how happy I am right now.

ladyblack888 October 13 2004, 19:45:59 UTC

Oh, I'm so friending you... Like now!

pigeongirl99 October 14 2004, 08:59:35 UTC

Wow.

Thanks.

wildroseofedo October 13 2004, 22:07:14 UTC

WOW. 0_0

I. Freakin'. LOVED. THIS. STORY.

The writing style was perfect ... disjointed to fit the scene, train-of-thought ... so different, I loved it sooo much!! XD

Thank you for sharing!!

pigeongirl99 October 14 2004, 09:00:35 UTC

I'm blown away that you liked it this much.

Wow.

I'm just amazed, and over the moon, Thank You.

fadagaski October 14 2004, 13:30:19 UTC

That was breathtaking. So unique in layout, and ... yeah. Am speechless. Probably loved the last bit the best, because Remus' loss is almost palpable, but his strength of character to keep going is even more so.

pigeongirl99 October 15 2004, 10:26:58 UTC

I am in severe shock that so many people seem to like this. I'm used to one or two firends telling me it was good but that's it.

Wow.

Thank you so very, very much for commenting. And thanks so much for pointing out your fav. bit, it really does help me grasp what works and what doesn't.

Cheers.