Fic: Something More

[remuslives23]

Title: Something More
Author: remuslives23
Rating: PG-15
Word Count: 935
Pairing/Characters: Andy, Gwen, mentions of Team Torchwood
Summary: "The trouble with Gwen, Andy thinks as he watches team Torchwood packing up their stuff, is that she isn't happy with what she's got."
Notes/Warnings: Spoiler: Great liberties taken with timing for 'Everything Changes'.

Comments

[floette]

PC Andy doesn't get enough love! I loved this - fic with little-loved characters makes me smile so hard kind of like your sidebar, and I especially loved how you put in the little additions with his thoughts, particularly about Gwen.

Also, SOCO = YAY. I'm a SOCO in training and so I love to see this term in fic rather than CSI's (particularly in English/British fandoms).

[remuslives23]

I do love my sidebar! And I love Andy! He doesn't get enough love, and I was really nervous about writing him as I've not written him before. I'm so glad you liked it.

And wow! It looks like such an interesting job. I'd love to do something like that. :)

[floette]

Your sidebar is highly distracting! You got him spot on, I think, and that can be really hard with side-characters.

It is brilliant! Dissertation writing like I'm doing now, not so much, but the actual swiling around for fingerprints etc is brilliant. I keep being told that I sound like a saleswoman, but there.

[wykling]

Aaaaw *hugs Andy* I loved his thoughts here! Especially because yes, Tosh and Jack are both very sexy and Andy is only human too ;3
Great entry! And you're the first, aren't you? Kudos for that! *hugs you*:D

[remuslives23]

Thanks! I think as much as Jack annoys Andy, he intrigues him just as much. :)

And yay! I think I was first by an hour or two! :)

[owensheart]

Oh I LOVE PC Andie's POV int his. we dont see enought of him and You got him down so well.

[remuslives23]

Thanks, hon! I love Andy and I'm glad this turned out alright. I haven't written him before so I was nervous! :)

[wiredblowfish]

Well done. I found it very sad. Andy seems such an outsider. He has desires like Gwen, he just doesn't have the confidence to do anything about it. I loved the little flashes of lust, resentment and envy.

[remuslives23]

Thanks! That's one of the things I wanted to get across. That it was only a lack of confidence (and perhaps self esteem) that stopped Andy from being in Gwen's place. Thanks for reading, hon. :)

[beesandbrews]

This is really insightful. This prompt suits you.

[remuslives23]

Thank you! :) I wanted to do something different from what might be expected of me for this prompt.

Thanks for reading, hon. *hugs*