Fic: Moons and Junes

[remuslives23]

Title:Moons and Junes
Author: remuslives23
Rating:PG15
Word Count: 336
Summary: 'I know it's a common whim, to kiss under the moon...' - Anna Akhmatova
Notes: Written for prompt seventeen at dogdaysofsummer. Title from 'Both Sides Now' by Joni Mitchell.

Comments

[mysecretashes]

That was so very, very lovely! It leaves me a bit dreamy-eyed. :D

[remuslives23]

Thanks, hon! I'd hoped it would have that effect. :)

[isisanubis]

.....

i'm sitting here, staring at my moniter, trying to come up with a decent way to praise this. but i can't. it's so beautiful that i don't think anything i can say would do it justice.

'As they cried out their completion, it hid its face, giving them their moment where they were the only two people in the world and all that mattered was that they were falling apart together'

brava

[remuslives23]

*hugs you*

Thanks so much for your lovely comment! I'm so glad you liked it and that line as I fumbled over it several times before deciding on the final wording. :)

[brissygirl]

Well done Julie! I could totally imagine the boys not on a bed but out in the woods somewhere starkers undulating against each other coming apart at the seams during their coupling.

Beautiful darling!

[remuslives23]

:) I did actually start them out in the open because it's got that kind of feel to it, but they wanted to get on a bed so... *shrugs* I have to do what they tell me to do. :)

Thanks for reading, hon!

[kingzgurl]

wow. that's just too incredible for words right now. i'm left utterly speechless by the beauty of this.

[remuslives23]

*squees*

Thanks, hon! I'm so thrilled you liked it. :)

[fancypantsdylan]

That was so beautiful, I love the descriptions of their love making, truly awesome

[remuslives23]

Thanks! I suck at descriptions so I'm so pleased you liked them. :)