Toujours Pur

[loneraven]

Title: Toujours Pur
Author: Raven
Summary: "He lingered almost too long, and decided abruptly that a schoolboy crush was one thing but a werewolf’s obsession was entirely another, and she was making him more dangerous."
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sirius/Remus, Remus/Bellatrix
Disclaimer: Not mine, JKR's.
Author you were assigned: ranalore
Notes: Sorry about the

Comments

[ranalore]

WOW. This is just...it's just...WOW. Thank you. You have taken my little drabble and made something gorgeous of it. Something I could never have imagined, and something absolutely perfect. I am in awe.

[loneraven]

You're very welcome, and I really am glad you liked it because I'm not good at het at the best of times. It really was a good drabble; it made me think.

[ranalore]

I tried to write it so that my remixing author could go the het or slash route, whichever direction they felt inspired. And you really did fantastic.

::hugs story to her::

[not_vacillating]

Raven, I am deeply impressed by that. You took the Sirius-Bella parallel in the original and stretched it, really very convincingly, and the note of darkness at the end is just what it needed-- and yet that somehow swings into something happy, because Bella is dark but Remus turns away from her. Good work, girl. I knew you could do it. (There are just a couple of details I'd point out if I was betaing, but at this stage I'm guessing you might not want to hear them.)

[loneraven]

*grins* I finally did it, after all of that! And after hearing your comments, I am a happy Raven. I may take you up on the beta offer when I come to post the story on FA/Sleeping With Ghosts - it was a very quick job and I have no doubt it shows.

[not_vacillating]

Not that badly, actually. But I'll be glad to run a beta-eye over it, whenever you're ready.

[donnaimmaculata]

Oh, that was good! I find the idea of Remus/Bellatrix strangely appealing, and you worked out the fascination he could have felt for her very well indeed. I liked it a lot.