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lotus0kid November 19 2008, 15:39:02 UTC
Oh, this is excellent! Exactly what happened in the story, it just wasn't said. I like to think the TARDIS realized that Kaylee already belonged to Serenity, and so she let her go.

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lotus0kid November 19 2008, 15:39:58 UTC
Ugh, jeez, I got so wrapped up in the story I forgot to say thank you! Thank you so much for this, it's really wonderful.

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sophinisba November 20 2008, 04:34:38 UTC
You're so welcome. I think this was the most fun of all the remixes I did this round. :D

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sophinisba November 20 2008, 04:36:31 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy you liked it. Your original was completely charming and I was so intrigued by what you wrote about the TARDIS humming, and what both the Doctor and Kaylee understood of that, that I just had to explore that part of it some more.

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visiblemarket November 19 2008, 15:53:47 UTC
Oh man, I loved this! I've read the original, but it's kind of awesome to see the different point of view on it, and that's pretty much what I always figured the TARDIS is really thinking.

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sophinisba November 20 2008, 15:36:31 UTC
Thank you very much! I loved the little clues to how the TARDIS was feeling in the original so this was really fun to do.

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ext_75726 November 19 2008, 17:43:03 UTC
I enjoyed reading this from the TARDIS's point of view. Nice.

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sophinisba November 20 2008, 15:42:53 UTC
Thank you!

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melodyunity November 21 2008, 00:51:30 UTC
This is lovely!

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sophinisba November 21 2008, 17:36:57 UTC
Thank you!!

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fish_echo November 23 2008, 03:23:17 UTC
Heheee! Poor TARDIS, didn't get to keep Kaylee :(

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sophinisba November 23 2008, 04:13:03 UTC
Ah well, it's like lotus0kid says, she understood Kaylee's heart belongs to Serenity. Thank you so much for coming over here. :)

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fish_echo November 25 2008, 05:49:19 UTC
she understood Kaylee's heart belongs to Serenity

True, true. But a telepathic space and time ship deserves a Doctor's Companion sometime who also understands *her* (Which is honestly something I hadn't thought about until I read this fic and its parent fic)

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