Torchwood: And the Beast (Wish All You Want Mix)

[remixabot]

Original Fic: And the Beast, by kindkit
Remix: And the Beast (Wish All You Want Mix) [Jack/Ianto, 165 Words, Rated PG-13, Warning: Character Death], by amory_vain

Comments

[kindkit]

This is really lovely. The bit about Ianto's tie just breaks my heart, it's such a perfect detail. Thank you!

[lilfluffykitten]

Oh, that was lovely and tragic and heartbreaking and... oh, just oh.
Excellent job.

[simplystars]

Reading both the remix and the original, I can only think holy crap.

The details, straightening Ianto's tie and holding him just that way... kindkit's original is the slowly creeping horror of realization, of what happened and what Jack did. This is a punch in the gut, and the lingering grief and guilt and self-loathing that Ianto is free of now, but Jack will carry within himself, every day to come.

Bravo, both of you. *shivers*

[akamine_chan]

Lovely. And the last line just kills.