♢ Avatar: Exiles (The 100% Yaoi, 0% Sex Remix)

[remixabot]

[ Zuko/Jet | PG-13 | 350 words ]
Jet strikes up a conversation with Zuko while aboard the ferry to Ba Sing Se. One reveals his feelings of lust for the other. Are the feelings mutual?

Original story: Of Pain and Pleasure by kyatto, 3,514 words.
Remix author: abraxas_ren

Comments

[trascendenza]

The fallen prince returned his gaze onto the sea. The exiled rebel leaned against the rail.
I love the way these lines work together; the contrast works so well. Very nicely paced and written :D