Due South: Tacit (The Sound of Silence Remix)

[remixabot]

[ Fraser/Kowalski | R | 696 words ]
Words were so terribly dangerous. They drowned out everything else.

Original story: Tacit by malnpudl, 1,500 words.
Remix author: nos4a2no9

Comments

[malnpudl]

Oh, wow. What a fascinating take on Fraser's motivation. I love it a lot, especially this:

Words were so terribly dangerous. They drowned out everything else.

That is just gorgeous, and so very telling.

This rocks. Thank you so very much!

[keerawa]

Every important conversation in his life had been conducted in the pause between thought and action. That's quite prfound, and I liked Fraser's reaction to Ray's 'wolf-grin'.

[bertybertle]

Oh! Delicious! *swallows story whole* I LOVE these kinds of little snippets. You can't stretch a moment like that into a 6000 word story - you lose too much impact. So this is perfect and awkward and "BAM! Deal with it! " And perfect - I said that, right?

[j_s_cavalcante]

Ahahahaha! Wicked, wicked Ray. I love it! Hee!

[azamiko]

Ray wins. :b