★ Star Trek: Deep Space Nine: Today Is Yesterday (Future Past Remix)

[remixabot]

★ [ Kira, Dukat | PG | 100 words ]
He comes and she sends him away.

Original story: Dislocation, Condemnation, Revelation, In Temptation by iamsab, 2,770 words.
Remix author: kernezelda

Comments

[trascendenza]

This captures the push-pull between Dukat and Kira so well. Lovely!

[kernezelda]

Thank you. It was my first time writing in DS9, so I was a bit worried. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[iamsab]

Now that is what I call a pitch-perfect 100 word drabble. I am so impressed that you took that story and distilled it to its barest essence. And it packs such a punch...

Awesome. Thank you!

[kernezelda]

Thank you, and you're very welcome!

[astrogirl2]

This is a nicely succinct rendering of the original... which I am very glad you chose, because I went and read it, too, and liked it very much.

[kernezelda]

Thank you kindly! I really enjoyed Sab's original, too, although of course I couldn't leave a comment out of the blue around Remix time. :D

[subtilior]

Nice job, to boil down the quality of that already short fic into such a strong one-shot! Brrrr-r-rrr!

[kernezelda]

Thanks! I love your Labyrinth icon. :)