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trascendenza April 14 2008, 00:14:55 UTC
Augh. Man. Talk about beautifully bittersweet. Jason as a liar just rings so true, especially him almost starting to believe his lies, to be lured into the trap of thinking that if he says it enough he can just make it true.

But in this moment, he can see the Spanish sunset in Peter’s heavy lidded eyes, and for now, he can pretend.
*soft sigh*

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theswearingkind April 14 2008, 00:41:04 UTC
this is so goddamn good. i'm so glad someone took this moment and made it more true, more ambivalent, more - everything, really.

and yes. jason is a huge fucking liar. so goddamn good, seriously.

thank you thank you thank you.

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fragilesymphony April 22 2008, 18:55:44 UTC
I'm so, so, so glad you like it. And really, thank you for writing that Spain line in the first place. My favorite line in bare fiction.

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theswearingkind April 23 2008, 01:52:18 UTC
like is not a strong enough word for how i feel about this.

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didaverseend April 16 2008, 22:20:54 UTC
God I'm in love with you.. there was so much beauty in this little thing... so perfect...

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