✩ Inuyasha: Not Yet (There Will Be Blood Remix)

[remixabot]

✩ [ Kohaku, Kagura | PG-13 | 200 words ]
Kagura comforts Kohaku who’s tormented by memories that come alive through the power of the jewel-shard.

Original story: Asunder by numisma, 3,826 words.
Remix author: abraxas_ren

Comments

[trascendenza]

Wow; the prose and pacing really lend to the confused, dreamy feeling in this. Nicely done!

[dr_abraxas]

Thanks!

[numisma]

Wow, what a way to crunch a nearly 4K fic into 200 words. XD It's got just enough visceral imagery and simplicity to entice and, as the person above said, confuse. If I weren't already the one who wrote the fic you remixed, I'd so want to read it now. Thank you thank you! ♥

[dr_abraxas]

Aw thanks :D When I was given my assignment, that was the first story I went to, I must have told you already that it influenced me when I started getting into Inuyasha. I'm still drawn more to those two (and Naraku) than the other characters. It was an absolute privilege to remix it and I'm so glad you liked the effort.

[numisma]

I most definitely remember that.

I think it's funny that you remixed my fic, Jain remixed another of mine, and I remixed for both of you.