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keerawa October 22 2009, 02:47:57 UTC
No, what Bobby misses is the days he could tell right from wrong without having to think on it - when the knowledge was like sweat about to break skin, there whether he knew it or not.
Excellent Bobby-voice here, and I love this metaphor. Such an unsual, visceral sensation, and I KNOW when right and wrong feels that way. A terrible thing for him to lose...

Thank you so much!

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theswearingkind October 28 2009, 01:17:33 UTC
Thank you! I loved loved loved your original - pretty much as soon as I found it, I knew it was what I wanted to work with.

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anonymous October 27 2009, 20:50:33 UTC
Okay, I have to admit ignorance of this character (I feel like someday I'll be compelled to watch Supernatural just so I can read all the damn fic out there!), BUT, damn, girl. You are in fine form. The imagery in this is beautiful -- the fist around his heart, sweat about to break skin, aiming for the heart -- it's all so visceral. And I love the line It’s end times though I can't exactly explain why.

Looooooove ya :D

- sheerbean

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theswearingkind October 28 2009, 01:20:07 UTC
(I would love to hear your reaction to SPN, but to be honest, I think you'd be totally, totally bored by it.)

Aww, thank you, sweetie! As always, your comments are best. <3

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